OK, this is the final mock-up. As in I know the art isn't very good and maybe better sound effects, but I am happy with the story and the options and everything seems to at least work.
So the general idea is that you click on objects on the screen to reveal more narration or more explanation. There is only one story path, but I do want to eventually have it so the reader is able to choose the order in which they go through the chapters. (Including 2 paths to start as chapter 1.)